wolf rp

[fireprincess624]

I am new at this but I will try my best

A 2 year old black male wolf was running through the dark forest as the sun started to peek though the trees...As he ran he soon found a cave..he walked close to in seeing in anything was in sde of it...It was empty.and no one seemed to be living in it..so he made it his new home..he laid down in the dark cave as the sun rose to the top of the sky..the wolf had a scare down the right of his eye..from a battle with his father when he was only 1 year old..he got kicked out of his clan and doent like to talk about it but no one has asked him since he hasnt seen anyone..As the sun rose to the middle of the sky he came out of the cave and sat of some rocks.

[Ferasei]

ooc; I have some advice for you, if you want. Use punctuations instead of "...". Try to type out numbers, like four instead of 4. You also have a few grammar and spelling errors. If you feel like you won't be able to correct those, type your posts in a word document.

Here's how I would have possibly written that post:

A black, two-year-old wolf was running through the dark, ominous forest that bordered a low cliff. Light seeped through the trees as the sun began to rise above the horizon. The cold morning air blew against the wolf as he ran, awakening his senses.

As he ran, a cave came into his sight. He slowed his pace as he came upon the cave, cautiously peeking inside. It was empty, and showed no signs of anything living in it previously, so he decided to use it as shelter. He walked in and laid down on the hard floor of the cave, watching the sun slowly rise in the sky.

Soon, the sun had risen to a much farther position in the sky, and now shone brightly upon the earth. The wolf stood again and wandered outside, sitting again at a spot close to the cave's entrance. He began to reminisce about the scare that graced his right eye. That dark day he had battled his father, and had been forever shunned from his clan.

[Kistna]

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[fireprincess624]

srry if I posted this t you can join in

[Kistna]

((Alright.))
<sup>A very large caramel colored male wolf stood at the edge of new lands. He had deep-set almond brown eyes, and around his chin and neck there was a lighter brown. This male loved to eat and probably had the stickiest paws of any wolves known.

His tail was raised high and walked with much pride, for being a wolf and living in a world of chaos is something to be proud of, also he had his best friend in the world at his side. None other compared to her. Though they weren't officially bound to one another, it was like blue lines and white paper, they are sure as heck hard to separate.

This, with full adoration, was Hige.

He was sharp as knife and could fight very well. One that is not to be messed with. Hige looked to his right and a smile came upon his lips. He gave a howl saying 'Here we are. '

As the full moon cast its shadow down on the scarcely frosted lands, another canine decided to make her presence known. She stood in the shadows, dark navy blue eyes glimmering out in the night.

The female had sleek black fur that rustled lightly with the gentle breeze. Her name was Ribsey, so say her parents. But she gave herself another name for that curse was hopefully soon to be forgotten.

The name that she called herself was Blue.

Indeed she was a very skinny female, but that never bothered her. Blue could hold her own in battle, hunting, whatever skills needed, arose. She may have looked like the wind would take her down, but nay, she stood strong.

The female darted through the shadows, only to appear in the tall boughs of a tree. She watched the wolves before her, a small smile perched on her maw. Her tail brushed the crisp air like a banner in the wind.

Alas, Blue tipped back her maw, closed her eyes and let a howl of her own ring out over the lands. It was a sweet song, a harmony with the many choruses of the night. This was Ribsey. No. This was Blue. Hige and his best friend Blue, hopefully here to stay.</sup>

[fireprincess624]

As the black male came out he heard a howl from another wolf. He didn’t answer to the wolf but just walked to a sparkling stream of water nearby. As he drank from the crystal clear water he heard another howl. He decided to reply to this one.

AS he howled by in reply to the second howl he said “who are you?” The male walked off in the direction that the howl came from..

He soon saw another wolf in the clearing of the forest. He kept low to the bushes hoping he wouldn’t be seen, but he really didn’t have anything to hide from. He wasn’t scare of other wolfs, but he didn’t want to bother the other wolf so he just left.

He soon got back to where the stream was. He sat down on some rocks eating some lunch he had just got. As he finished eating it he went back for another drink. He soon heard foot steps maybe from another wolf coming to get a drink as well.